Rangi and Papatuanuku story

 In my cooperative group we made a ed book about Ranginui and Papatuanuku on a slide show for maori language week.We first agreed on who is sharing the slide show with our group.Then planned on who is doing what part of the story of in the beginning.After our planning we went straight into work.

It was easy to write my part of the story and doing the background because I new the story well and the part I was doing.

It was challenging to make my writing into my own words and making sure it makes sense and polyline Ranginui.

Next time I will try not to waffle my writing to much and go back to re read it in the first place. 

Save our future Environment poster

 In Mrs. Barkers writing group we been learning how to do  persuasive writing.We also been making   poster on what is happening to our environment and how we can help save it.

I found it easy to decorate my mahi because I made the background similar to what my paragraph is about.

It was challenging to find my mistakes in my writing before Mrs.Barker took a look to help fix them because I didn't read them out loud enough to myself to hear them.

Next time I will keep re read my work at least 5 times to make sure it makes sense so it is more understanding.

Persuasive Writing

 

We have been learning how to do persuasive writing.We had to make a plan and think  who we are persuasive is.

It was easy to make my plan because I had all my ideas in my head ready to put in my writing book.

It was challenging to think of the words to explain and spread out my plan more because I couldn't think of some rich sentise to make writing make sense.

Next time I will keep re reading over my work out loud to myself to make sure it make sense.So the reader understand my writing.   

Scratch Ebook

I enjoy working with my team!We were learning about how to create a ebook on a slide show and share something you can do on scratch.

I found it easy  to make my slide show because all I needed to do was decorate my slide and add a title, my name and my video.

I found it challenging to connect with my teammates.

Next time I will be more creative with my slides.