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spring & ocean.

 spring.                                          what's an ocean?
   beautiful flower.                         where sea animals live.                
smell of sweet little flower          blue sea 
   tickling noses.                           make surname.            
                                                       heavy waves
                 green seaweed.
                 rock falls.
                making little rock pools.
               that's an ocean.



I'm learning about Japaneses poet . I really like that I know a new poet. next time i will write more about the the japanese poet.  

Going to the beach

 In Mrs.Barkers writing ropu we were doing recount writings about something we did in the past. step1 we had to make a plan on what our writing was going to be about. Mine was about my family and I going to the beach for the day. Step 2 we had to open our device and and write in a google doc.

I enjoyed visualizing and imaging the day we went to the beach. Because it was fun to remember the day well writing the story.

It was challenging to think of some really great words to explain some parts of the recount writing.

Next time I will make my writing more interesting to read.



buddy art

I was  learning more about my buddy and incest.
I liked that my buddy and I choose the colour for the stripe on the snake.
I found hard to colour it nicely.
Next time I will colour it more nicely. 

 

Save our habitat

In our writing groups we had to pretend to be four different animals in the Australia.Because us people are taking away there home and we needed to write down on how the animals feel.At the end of the writing we put all the animals together.

It was easy to think on how to write and explain how the animals feel because the teacher showed an example.

It was challenging to choose the right animals to make it rhyme.

Next time I will make I more creative.

12 day's of chirstmas

 Today we made a twelve day of kiwi christmas of our own. Firstly we hoped into groups then we worked and agree on what our 12 kiwi christmas lyrics are and what order there going to be.

It was easy and simple to copy and paste the words because some one in our group did most of the work and we only had to write on the next slideshow.

It was challenging to choose the colour of the words to match the background and find some little mistakes on our slide show.

next time I will try and find the mistakes and help my team a bit more.