Thursday, 4 April 2019

The pickle watermelon.

The pickle watermelon.

‘Mmmmm’ the look of the was like a small  triangle red and green.
It feat hard and a bit sticky. When i smell it was like a apple juice. When i open
my big mouth ‘crunch soourp’. in side my mouth i taste little little soft dots in
my mouth i didn't like it so i just look at the pips in sted. Some were brown some
were white. But it  was a bit okay then it look like a triangle without the top on it.
On the outside of the all the pickle watermelon were will look like a
green oval  i toke little nibble on it.
this is my writing and art i really like i did the what it sound,smell,look & felt. next time i will writ more about my writing.

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